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Friday, 15 March 2013

I was in the garden looking at he flowers and it was as wet as a pool over flowing over the sides it looked like a big river.

I was in the pool swimming pool it was so hot it was like I was in on top of the sun  so hot dieing off heat

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zoe
    I like that you have used similes in your post but would have liked more of a story. Please remember to put a title and labels in your post.

    Stephanie

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